This is fucking excellent. The dim lights, the gentle face touch, the shine on the cock and the tongue, showing how wet they are… such an intimate moment. Imagine the stillness, dragging out your perception of this perfect instant of pleasure. Touching his face, running your fingers lightly along his soft skin, his tongue doing the same, coming up from the base of the shaft and savoring the taste of the tip. He can feel your heartbeat in the pulsing of your cock, and you could swear you can see his, pounding with anticipation under his bare chest. He doesn’t smile, but he never breaks eye contact as he closes his lips around you again and you brush back his hair, trail your thumb across his forehead… as he slides you into his mouth, and you let out a half-moan, a sharp little exhale as he kisses the base and you reach the warm back of his throat… you place a hand on the back of his head and tangle your fingers in his hair as his tongue slips across every inch of your dick, desperate to know it, and you, both of you knowing you’ll never forget this exquisite feeling
(I got complimented on my writing and now I wanna do it more please excuse my horny rambles)